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About Me Member Deviously Deviant MargieMFemale/United States Recent Activity Deviant for 2 Years
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By the light of day

Mon Nov 5, 2007, 5:13 PM
I'm standing outside
It's dark and cold
It's raining hard
Both water and blood
The water's from my tears
The blood from my wrist
It's too dark to tell
The difference between the two
As they drip into the snow
Leaving a dark red stain behind me
As I go
Walking through the forest
Rull of the nights sounds
The howl and yip of a cyote
The hoot of an owl
But in the morning
I don't think that ever again
I'll make a sound
Because I'll be covered in snow
Lying dead on the ground
And I doubt my body will ever be found
For the hurt people have caused led me away
Deep into the forest
To die the next day
I hope you'll never again hurt someone this way
But you have to me
So I'm dying and will be dead
By the light of day.

  • Mood: Rejected
  • Reading: Nothing
  • Watching: The computer screen
  • Playing: Nothing
  • Eating: Nothing
  • Drinking: Water

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:iconfailingjune:
Hey :) It's Matt from GIMS (in 8th now)//

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:iconbluasylum:
thank you so much for all of the :+fav:'s! i'm going to browse your gallery now :P

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"But I don’t want comfort. I want God, I want poetry,
I want real danger, I want freedom, I want goodness.
I want sin."
The Savage, Brave New World
:iconpeteywaz:
interesting gallery (welcome to DA by the way) anyways parusing around adn saw your 'sad shot'. works interestingly as a thumbnail and as such a small image. Now i dont know if you like or dislike critque, but i think you have some decent potential here. I like me n the sun the best out of your gallery since it seems the most experimental out of any of them. But sad, the one that caught my eye at first struck me as an interesting shot because it immediately apparent the emotion into the piece. it may not be proffesionally executed but technique comes with experimentation and a little time. Great job, keep up the good work!

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I hear their weakness is bananas, DO WE HAVE ANY BANANAS?!
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:iconmargiem:
thx. yea, i still need alot of work. i'm takin a photo class but it not really good. but thx nyways.

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Margie <3 u
:iconpeteywaz:
everyone needs a lot of work, its what i like about art, theres really no cap on how good people can be. besides we all start out somewhere. have you tried experimenting with things like angles at all?

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I hear their weakness is bananas, DO WE HAVE ANY BANANAS?!
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:iconpeteywaz:
messed up can be good? why dont you post any of em?

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I hear their weakness is bananas, DO WE HAVE ANY BANANAS?!
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:iconmargiem:
sorta, they r really messed up tho. hehe

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Margie <3 u
:iconpeteywaz:
messed up can be good? why dont you post any of em?

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I hear their weakness is bananas, DO WE HAVE ANY BANANAS?!
[link]

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